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Re: untitled
Thought I owed you a proper crit, since you obviously have enough talent to drown all of us...not that that a bad thing...it's all good all good. so here it ...
May 20, 2005 -
Re: you know i'd sing for you
very tranquil tone...I like it. And such great imagery...I like that too. this is such a beautiful, rainy day piece. my favorite lines are -- they'd illuminate my soul but ...
May 16, 2005 -
Re: surreality (a short story) (Over 13) /P
I have one freaking long word for my reaction when I finished reading this.... awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! great job Brad! man o man this was a great read. there are some mi
May 15, 2005 -
Re: belfast on a spring evening
oh so purty....this was quite good and I enjoyed it...well turth be told I enjoyed it very much. I have a special place in my heart for Ireland. I especially ...
May 13, 2005 -
Re: Young Adult Fiction
I agree...I think I've read everything worth a damn in all the school libraries...when I was about 12 or 13 I started reading adult books because I wasn't being pushed ...
May 10, 2005 -
Re: Pull Yourself Together, Girl
you and Inertia I swear are two who have taken over from two the nine Muses that frequent my head. after ready this passionate piece I was inspired and wrote ...
May 10, 2005 -
Re: the burning sensation of sunlight
OMG...that's the only thought that comes to mind mind after some very prolonged moments of speechlessness. This...ah...you talent...there is nothing I could say that would compare. It's so full of ...
May 7, 2005 -
Re: ...Between...
first, I loved this poem I just did a show, and they are tearing down our theater so it's not in use anymore. You really captured the moment. second, I ...
May 6, 2005 -
Re: About Last Night...
you must be some kind of muse. I read the title when I was searching for something and I spawned an entire poem, nothing like yours, but still. wierd huh? ...
May 6, 2005 -
Re: Napoleonic Fiction 8 (someone read it for once...)
BRAVO! I adore Napoleanic stuff and this is by far one of the best unpublished stories I have on the time period. Sorry I haven't reply to any of the ...
Apr 28, 2005 -
Re: Love in P-land America (OVER SIXTEEN)
its still poetry. To change the subject slightly I like this poem, and I think the profanity worked well with the emotion quality. well written too, I could see everything ...
Apr 14, 2005 -
Re: Rain Day Dreams
I really enjoyed reading this piece. It holds so much great imagery. Bravo! reminds me of me...which I think is a good thing. Couldn't think of much more than a ...
Apr 13, 2005 -
Re: Bluebird
I really enjoyed reading this poem. Everything up to the last stanza is so lyric and filled with tranquil images, that the last stanza catches you, and that is my ...
Apr 13, 2005
